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Wednesday 21 May 2014

This World is Not Conclusion - Notes #1



THIS WORLD IS NOT CONCLUSION

THEMES: HOPE, TIME, ANGER AT WORLD, HAPPINESS, AFTERLIFE

SYMBOL
-          “Tooth”
o   The metaphor is concise: the soul is as a person with a toothache being treated by a dentist. Despite the painkillers and anesthetics the dentist may provide, the toothache endures. The metaphor is expanded however, as it is not the nerves inside the tooth that ache, but the tooth itself that “nibbles.” What gnaws at us spiritually is alive.
-          “this world is not conclusion”
o   expression of confidence in there being more to life than this ® “species stand beyond”
o   There is more to reality than this everyday world we live in, but we can only form conjectures about it. Christianity has inspired martyrs but “Faith” still “slips.” There really is no conclusion—all our searchings lead to questions rather than answers. Existence doesn't "conclude" at death. Dickinson is using both meanings of "conclusion": the answer to a question and the end of an affair.
o   The apparent omission of the determiner ‘a’ draws us to seeing the capitalised ‘Conclusion’ even more as a proper noun and thereby further develops the irony that this world is not all there is. The full stop becomes ironic in its finality.
-          “narcotics cannot still the tooth that nibbles at the soul”
o   the last two lines put all into perspective.  The Marquis de Sade and Marx had both previously likened religion to opium.  In this extended, corporeal metaphor, Dickinson takes this idea further by referring to various human activities as being opiates that fail to numb aching personal experience: the various opiates are enumerated in the poem as being contempt, crucifixion, organised religion, philosophy, academia and faltering faith; the suffering of personal experience gradually wears away the spiritual integrity of the soul.
STRUCTURE
-          no paragraphing
o   there is not a “frame” ® embodies liberty and freedom
-          one full stop and lots of hyphens
o   full stop® the only thing that the poet is definite® she is certain that there is some that “stand beyond” life ®assuring herself
o   lots of hyphens  ® there’s no conclusion of this, hammers home the fact that there is eternity, enjambment exemplifies flow of freedom
-          non-structural
o   there is no restriction and confinement here 
-          solid rhyme: “soul”, “roll”


FEATURES

-          “gestures from the pulpit”
o   Gesturing from “the pulpit” may dull the pain as a “narcotic” might; “Strong Hallelujahs” from the congregation might help, too. But ultimately that “Tooth” will “nibble at our souls” until the day we pass through that “Riddle”
-          Although there is no paragraphing , but we could separate the verse by the poet’s flow of ideas
o   The first quatrains establishes the poet’s belief that there are beings beyond earthly life. They are invisible, like music, but as real as the sound that music makes.
o   Next we see that there is a world beyond this one that “beckons” yet “baffles” us. Philosophy and wisdom can’t help us find it. At the end we must all pass through that “Riddle” that is death to find out what lies beyond.
o   Yet so great is the mystery that scholars continually puzzle over it and the seekers have “borne / Contempt” of their generation and even crucifixion to gain what seems to be the prize that beckons
-          “invisible, as music”
o   The analogy with music is a strong affirmation of Dickinson’s belief, as well as being a concise example of how it is possible to ‘intuit’ when there is no experience through our senses: music – which can be heard but not seen – is a metaphor for knowing without empirical evidence.
-          Faith in the afterlife is beyond reason and objective experiment, regardless of some of Dickinson’s contemporaries’ efforts to weigh the soul. But she also points to the martyrs of their faith who give all to achieve it. But her feelings toward this religious view of the next life is obvious. Religion, for Dickinson, cannot disguise the truth of our inevitable leaning into eternity.


CONCLUSION
“Sagacity” cannot serve as the “narcotics” to our soul, but the recognition of “this world is not conclusion” is sufficient to tranquilise and lead us to liberation.


MAIN QUOTATIONS
-          “narcotics cannot still the tooth, that nibbles at the soul”
-          “invisible, like music”, “species stand beyond”
-          “faith slips, and laughs, and rallies”
-          “twigs of evidence and ask a vane”
-          “philosophy don't know, sagacity must go”

RHYMES

-          solid rhyme: “roll”, “soul”

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